Subject: [6lo] Review of draft-ietf-6lo-dect-ule-04, section 3.2.1

From: Kerry Lynn <[email-masked]>
Date: Mon, 21 Mar 2016 14:55:04 -0700

Delete the sentence that reads

Least significant bit of this address is the last bit
in network order.

In the sentence that reads

First bit is set to a one for addresses derived from
the RFPI and first bit is set to zero for addresses
derived from the IPEI.

You either want to substitute "i/g bit" or "8th bit" for "first" (two
places)

In the sentence that reads

>From these intermediate 48 bit addresses are derived
IIDs accordig to the guidance of [RFC4291].

s/accordig/according/

In the sentence that reads

In the derived IIDs the 7th bit is set to one to indicate
that the addresses are not global unique.

s/one/zero/  (See RFC 4941, Appendix A; note the u/l bit gets inverted in
the IID)
s/global/globally/

In the sentence that reads

For example from RFPI=11.22.33.44.55 the derived IID is
82:11:22:FF:FE:33:44:55 and from IPEI=01.23.45.67.89 the
derived IID is 02:01:23:FF:FE:45:67:89.

s/82/01/ and s/02/00/  (this is the net effect of the corrections made
above).

Regards, Kerry Lynn