Subject: [Adslmib] G.Bond Draft-ietf-adslmib-gbond-mib-05.txt - Some Editorial comments

From: Menachem Dodge <[email-masked]>
Date: Mon, 20 Dec 2010 13:56:11 +0200

Hi Edward,

I have the following editorial comments on Draft-ietf-adslmib-gbond-mib-05.txt:

Section 4.1.3 5th Last paragraph:

Replace "initialiation"  with "initialization".

Section 4.1.5 in the table - in the "g.Bond interpretation column for ifIndex"

Missing word "are"
"as there some GBS and BCE specific" should be "as there are some GBS and BCE specific".

Section 5.3 Mapping of DSL Forum TR-159 Managed Objects
There are still two  "_EdNote" s left in the table with an unanswered question.

Section 7 Security Considerations 5th Last Paragraph:

Replace "evasdrop" with "eavesdrop".

Section 8:  IANA Considerations:

OLD-> "Three new values of IANAifType: g9981, g9982 and g9982..."

NEW->" Three new values of IANAifType: g9981, g9982 and g9983..."

Best Regards,
Menachem