Subject: Re: [apps-discuss] Apps-area review of draft-ietf-p2psip-base-18

From: S Moonesamy <[email-masked]>
Date: Wed, 07 Sep 2011 22:26:50 -0700

Hi Vijay,

Thanks for the review.  I am forwarding it to the apps-discuss mailing list.

Regards,
S. Moonesamy

At 15:27 07-09-2011, Vijay K. Gurbani wrote:
>I have been selected as the Applications Area Review Team reviewer 
>for this draft (for background on apps-review, please see 
>http://www.apps.ietf.org/content/applications-area-review-team).
>
>Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call 
>comments you may receive. Please wait for direction from your 
>document shepherd or AD before posting a new version of the draft.
>
>Document: draft-ietf-p2psip-base-18
>Title: REsource LOcation And Discovery (RELOAD) Base Protocol
>Reviewer: Vijay K. Gurbani
>Review Date: Sep-7-2011
>IETF Last Call Date: Not known
>IESG Telechat Date: Sep-8-2011
>
>Summary: This draft is ready for publication as a Proposed Standard.
>
>Major Issues: None.
>
>Minor Issues: 1.
>
>Nits: Few.
>
>Minor Issue:
>
>- In S3.6.1, you may want a forward reference to a later section where
>  the well-known server URL is used to fetch the configuration document.
>
>Nits:
>
>- S2, Terminology: Bootstrap node ---
>  s/help Nlocate/help locate/
>
>- S2, Connection Table: At this point, "Attach" message
>  has not been described.  Maybe a forward reference to S5.5.1 will
>  help.
>
>- S2, Destination List ---
>  s/A list of IDs/A list of Node-IDs/
>
>- S9, bullet item towards the end of Page 104 ---
>  s/(>1000)/(>1000 peers)/
>
>- S9.5, right before S9.6 starts ---
>  s/(n+2^(128-i)/(n+2^(128-i))/
>
>Thanks,
>
>- vijay
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