Subject: [AVTCORE] AD Evaluation of draft-ietf-avtext-lrr-05

From: Ben Campbell <[email-masked]>
Date: Thu, 25 May 2017 17:47:30 -0500

Hi,

This is my AD Evaluation of draft-ietf-avtext-lrr-05. I only have a couple of editorial comments, which can be handled along with any IETF Last Call comments. I will request IETF Last Call shortly.

Thanks!

Ben.

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-3.2, last paragraph: the “MAY” seems like a statement of fact, rather than normative permission. Please consider lower case.

-4.3, 2nd paragraph: " 
Figure 8 shows the format of the layer index field for H.265 streams. The "RES" fields MUST be set to 0 on transmission and ignored on reception.”

Is that MUST a new normative requirement, or a reference to one in RFC 7798? If the later, please use descriptive (i.e. non-2119) language.