Subject: [bfcpbis] 4583bis: Pull request based on shepherd review

From: Christer Holmberg <[email-masked]>
Date: Sun, 17 Jun 2018 09:03:06 +0000

Hi,

Mary B did a shepherd review of draft-4583bis, and she had a number of comments.

Based on her comments, I have created a PR:

https://github.com/cdh4u/draft-bfcp-4583bis/pull/8

As you will see, most of the changes are editorial.

However, you will also see that lots of text has been removed from the "Authentication" section (and the section has been re-named). The reason is that it contained text that was not BFCP-specific. The only thing left is more or less the text on how the TLS role selection is done for BFCP.

In addition, some text was removed from the "Security Considerations", e.g., text about S/MIME that was outdated (and, again, not BFCP-specific).

Please take a look.

Regards,

Christer