Subject: [Captive-portals] Alissa Cooper's Yes on charter-ietf-capport-00-03: (with COMMENT)

From: "Alissa Cooper" <[email-masked]>
Date: Tue, 17 Nov 2015 12:27:30 -0800

Alissa Cooper has entered the following ballot position for
charter-ietf-capport-00-03: Yes

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COMMENT:
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The phrase "satisfy the requirements" is pretty ambiguous. I would
suggest either explaining what requirements are intended (e.g., "the
network operator's requirements for obtaining network access" or
something along those lines) or dropping the phrase altogether if the
point is really just to provide the URL.