Subject: [CCAMP] AD review of draft-ietf-ccamp-ospf-availability-extension

From: "BRUNGARD, DEBORAH A" <[email-masked]>
Date: Mon, 12 Sep 2016 17:24:08 +0000

Hi,

I've reviewed this document and provided some comments directly to the authors (using a word file):
- mostly suggestions to improve readability
- added some sentences on scoping to help the non-GMPLS reader understand this is only protocol e.g. the information and use of it is outside the scope.
- added a couple of sentences to boost the security section

Thanks,
Deborah