Subject: [Detnet] typos in https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-detnet-flow-information-model-00

From: "Pascal Thubert (pthubert)" <[email-masked]>
Date: Tue, 6 Feb 2018 15:12:22 +0000

Hello Janos and Balazs

(Happy new year : )

Reading https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-detnet-flow-information-model-00 I came onto the following:

Use of "DetNetwork" -> seems that a Net->Network  transform happened to widely

Section 6.4 discusses a service rank but is located in the Flow section. I expected a slightly different structure that would reflect the initial dichotomy in flows and services, where flows comprise source and destination information, as well as status, etc... That would place sections 7, 8 and 9 in section 6, and 10...13 into a new "flow" section that would include 6.4.

For flow identification over the UNI, would be good to mention the 5-tuple (source/destination addresses/port and flow label) in IPv6 and the 4-tuple in IPv4.

Cheers,

Pascal

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