Subject: Re: [Detnet] Murray Kucherawy's No Objection on draft-ietf-detnet-flow-information-model-13: (with COMMENT)

From: Balázs Varga A <[email-masked]>
Date: Thu, 14 Jan 2021 16:51:15 +0000

Hi Murray,
Thanks for the comments. Both are valid.
- Section1: Agree. I will delete the "In the IETF" phrase.
- Section5.4.2: Agree, thanks for the suggestion.
Cheers
Bala'zs

Ps: changes can be seen on GitHub:
https://github.com/detnet-wg/draft-ietf-detnet-flow-information-model/commit/7855ea01b1fec25ed1d4f0089bd990dc4b14ff1b

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Subject: Murray Kucherawy's No Objection on draft-ietf-detnet-flow-information-model-13: (with COMMENT)

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draft-ietf-detnet-flow-information-model-13: No Objection

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COMMENT:
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In Section 1, I don't understand what the paragraph starting "In the IETF ..."
means, because of those three words.  Is it different outside of the IETF?

Section 5.4.2:
OLD:
    Using wild cards for these attributes are specified ...
NEW:
    Use of wild cards for these attributes is specified ...