Subject: Re: [dtn] I-D Action: draft-ietf-dtn-tcpclv4-25.txt

From: Brian Sipos <[email-masked]>
Date: Tue, 16 Feb 2021 04:54:57 +0000

Magnus,
The -26 draft fixes this last identified typo. I haven't seen any other comments so I don't believe that there will be any further changes.

[1] https://www.ietf.org/archive/id/draft-ietf-dtn-tcpclv4-26.html

________________________________
From: Magnus Westerlund
Sent: Monday, February 15, 2021 10:38
To: [email-masked]; Brian Sipos
Cc: [email-masked]
Subject: RE: [dtn] I-D Action: draft-ietf-dtn-tcpclv4-25.txt

Hi,

If the author don't want to do one more revision can you give me one

OLD:

NEW:

Style change that I can include in the approval announcement.

Cheers

Magnus Westerlund

> -----Original Message-----
> From: dtn <[email-masked]> On Behalf Of R. Atkinson
> Sent: den 7 februari 2021 19:48
> To: Brian Sipos <[email-masked]>
> Cc: [email-masked]
> Subject: Re: [dtn] I-D Action: draft-ietf-dtn-tcpclv4-25.txt
>
> Hi,
>
> This simple typo really needs to be fixed.  Otherwise someone trying to
> implement who hasn’t been on the mailing list will be greatly confused.
>
> I agree this can be fixed easily either during IESG edits or maybe even during
> AUTH48.
>
> Thanks,
>
> Ran
>
> > On Feb 4, 2021, at 23:04, Brian Sipos <[email-masked]> wrote:
> >
> > All,
> > This latest revision of the TCPCLv4 draft addresses one comment from
> IANA about citing the X.680 specification, last minor comments from Ben
> Kaduk regarding TLS/PKIX details, and corrects several typos.
> >
> > I just noticed that my last edit itself has a minor typo. Where it says:
> > Earlier versions of TCPCL can mandate use of the bits keyEncipherment or
> keyAgreement.
> > should instead say:
> > Earlier versions of TLS can mandate use of the bits keyEncipherment or
> keyAgreement.
> > but this is not a normative statement and can be corrected during IESG
> editing if desired.
> >
> > Other than that, the document should be ready for final edit.
> > From: dtn <[email-masked]> on behalf of [email-masked]
> > <[email-masked]>
> > Sent: Tuesday, February 2, 2021 00:17
> > To: [email-masked] <[email-masked]>
> > Cc: [email-masked] <[email-masked]>
> > Subject: [dtn] I-D Action: draft-ietf-dtn-tcpclv4-25.txt
> >
> >
> > A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts
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> > This draft is a work item of the Delay/Disruption Tolerant Networking WG
> of the IETF.
> >
> >         Title           : Delay-Tolerant Networking TCP Convergence Layer Protocol
> Version 4
> >         Authors         : Brian Sipos
> >                           Michael Demmer
> >                           Joerg Ott
> >                           Simon Perreault
> >         Filename        : draft-ietf-dtn-tcpclv4-25.txt
> >         Pages           : 76
> >         Date            : 2021-02-01
> >
> > Abstract:
> >    This document describes a TCP-based convergence layer (TCPCL) for
> >    Delay-Tolerant Networking (DTN).  This version of the TCPCL protocol
> >    resolves implementation issues in the earlier TCPCL Version 3 of
> >    RFC7242 and updates to the Bundle Protocol (BP) contents, encodings,
> >    and convergence layer requirements in BP Version 7.  Specifically,
> >    the TCPCLv4 uses CBOR-encoded BPv7 bundles as its service data unit
> >    being transported and provides a reliable transport of such bundles.
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> >
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