Subject: Re: [Emu] Erik Kline's No Objection on draft-ietf-emu-eap-tls13-13: (with COMMENT)

From: Mohit Sethi M <[email-masked]>
Date: Fri, 1 Jan 2021 13:00:21 +0000

Hi Erik,

Thanks. These are now fixed in github: 
https://github.com/emu-wg/draft-ietf-emu-eap-tls13/commit/094aacf6826e1edaa4dc102acd683011311aa548

--Mohit

PS: Happy New Year 2021 to colleagues in EMU and IESG!

On 12/31/20 8:11 AM, Erik Kline via Datatracker wrote:
> Erik Kline has entered the following ballot position for
> draft-ietf-emu-eap-tls13-13: No Objection
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> COMMENT:
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> [[ nits ]]
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> [ section 1 ]
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> * s/and and/and/
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> [ section 2.1.7 ]
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> * "Many client certificates contains" -> "Many client certificates contain"
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> [ section 5.4 ]
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> * s/EAP--TLS/EAP-TLS/
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> [ section 5.9 ]
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> * "In the context EAP-TLS" -> "In the context of EAP-TLS"?
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