Subject: [forces] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC5810 (2572)

From: RFC Errata System <[email-masked]>
Date: Sat, 16 Oct 2010 05:47:45 -0700 (PDT)

The following errata report has been submitted for RFC5810,
"Forwarding and Control Element Separation (ForCES) Protocol Specification".

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You may review the report below and at:
http://www.rfc-editor.org/errata_search.php?rfc=5810&eid=2572

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Type: Editorial
Reported by: Jamal Hadi Salim <[email-masked]>

Section: global

Original Text
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The text on KEYINFO-TLV examples could be a little confusing.

The grammar is:
KEYINFO-TLV := KeyID FULLDATA-TLV
where the FULLDATA-TLV carries the KEYDATA. 
However, the examples dont show the text as being carried in the
FULLDATA-TLV instead they would show something along the lines of:
KEYINFO-TLV = KeyID=1, KEY_DATA=100

Corrected Text
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The best way to represent this is:
KEYINFO-TLV, V= {1, FULLDATA-TLV V={100}}

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RFC5810 (draft-ietf-forces-protocol-22)
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Title               : Forwarding and Control Element Separation (ForCES) Protocol Specification
Publication Date    : March 2010
Author(s)           : A. Doria, Ed., J. Hadi Salim, Ed., R. Haas, Ed., H. Khosravi, Ed., W. Wang, Ed., L. Dong, R. Gopal, J. Halpern
Category            : PROPOSED STANDARD
Source              : Forwarding and Control Element Separation
Area                : Routing
Stream              : IETF
Verifying Party     : IESG