Subject: [Gen-art] review of http://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-ietf-l3vpn-rt-constrain-02.txt

From: [email-masked]
Date: Wed, 28 Sep 2005 13:34:52 +0300

Review of:
http://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-ietf-l3vpn-rt-constrain-02.txt

This document seems like it is ready, but much of this technology is
outside of my knowledge bas.  I think that there are some things to be
addressed:

Issues:

1) Abstract full of acronyms, please expand.
2) Desperately needs a terminology section, as some of the terminology
is quite specific to VPN technology.

I'd recommend a document revision with the above 2 points addressed.

John

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