Subject: [Gen-art] draft-ietf-simple-presence-data-model-06.txt

From: Brian E Carpenter <[email-masked]>
Date: Wed, 23 Nov 2005 15:53:35 +0100

Elwyn Davies is on vacation in New Zealand, but with extraordinary
zeal, he sent me an SMS message with a Gen-ART mini-review of
draft-ietf-simple-presence-data-model-06.txt

[Duh, I don't know how to get SMS messages from my cell phone into
my email.]

Almost ready with nits

Should note that it updates 2778 and 3863 [in the Abstract].

[BC - 2778 is given as an Informative reference.
Are we sure it isn't actually a downref Normative reference?]

Editorial nits to be sent later.

    Brian, channelling Elwyn

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