Subject: [Gen-art] review of draft-ietf-l2vpn-signaling-06.txt

From: [email-masked]
Date: Thu, 19 Jan 2006 06:22:58 +0200

I wrote-up my review on paper during my flight and found the same issues
as Pekka S.

1) Missing references
2) Need some text on IPv6
3) Insufficient discussion on security service signaling.

nits: 

Might want to expand VPN in the abstract.
Terminology section wouldn't hurt.

John

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