Subject: [Gen-art] Gen-art review of draft-ietf-ccamp-inter-domain-framework-04.txt

From: Gonzalo Camarillo <[email-masked]>
Date: Fri, 21 Apr 2006 13:34:49 +0300

Hi,

I have been selected as General Area Review Team reviewer for this
draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see
http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html).

Draft: draft-ietf-ccamp-inter-domain-framework-04.txt
Reviewer: Gonzalo Camarillo <[email-masked]>
Review Date: 21 April 2006
IESG Telechat Date:  27 April 2006

Summary:

This draft is ready for publication as an Informational RFC. However,
the draft contains normative statements that make me wonder whether it
should be in the standards track instead.

Comments:

The Copyright Notice on the first page should be updated: remove "All
Rights Reserved".

Acronyms should be expanded the first time they appear in the draft. In
particular, MPLS should be expanded in the title.

Nit at the end of Section  2.5:
OLD:
capable of estbalishing LSPs
NEW:
capable of establishing LSPs
               ^^

Thanks,

Gonzalo

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