Subject: [Gen-art] draft-ietf-mobike-design-08

From: "Gray, Eric" <[email-masked]>
Date: Thu, 11 May 2006 18:24:03 -0400

Tero/Hannes,

I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for your draft.

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Please wait for direction from your document shepherd
or AD before posting a new version of the draft.

Draft: 
http://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-ietf-mobike-design-08.txt

This draft is ready to be published as an Informational RFC.
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NIT(s):
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In the Introduction section, fourth paragraph, second
sentence, there is a reference to "RFC2401bis [RFC4301],"
that may be vestigial (RFC2401bis should probably be
replaced with RFC4301).  This should probably be handled
as an RFC Editor note - provided that a change is needed.

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