Subject: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-siemborski-rfc1734bis-10.txt

From: [email-masked]
Date: Thu, 15 Feb 2007 00:50:10 -0500

I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) 
reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see 
http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html). 
Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments 
you may receive.
 
Document: draft-siemborski-rfc1734bis-10.txt
Reviewer: David L. Black
Review Date: February 14, 2007
IETF LC End Date: February 21, 2007
 
Summary:

This draft is basically ready for publication, but has nits
that should be fixed before publication.

Comments:

The draft generally looks good.  Multiple examples with explanations
are included.

idnits 2.02.1 found a few things to complain about:

  Checking boilerplate required by RFC 3978 and 3979, updated by RFC
4748:
  * This document has an original RFC 3978 Section 5.4 Copyright Line,
    instead of the newer IETF Trust Copyright according to RFC 4748.
  * This document has an original RFC 3978 Section 5.5 Disclaimer,
instead of
    the newer disclaimer which includes the IETF Trust according to RFC
4748.

  Checking nits according to
http://www.ietf.org/ietf/1id-guidelines.txt:
  * Missing expiration date.  The document expiration date should appear
on
    the first and last page.
  - No 'Intended status' indicated for this document; assuming Proposed
    Standard

This draft satisfies RFC 4422's requirements on protocol specifications
that use SASL.

Thanks,
--David
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