Subject: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Review of draft-ietf-simple-prescaps-ext-08

From: Christian Vogt <[email-masked]>
Date: Fri, 26 Oct 2007 15:22:41 +0300

I have been selected as the General Area Review Team 
(Gen-ART) reviewer for this draft (for background on 
Gen-ART, please see
http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html).

Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call
comments you may receive.

Document:  draft-ietf-simple-prescaps-ext-08.txt
Reviewer:  Christian Vogt
Review Date:  October 26, 2007

Summary:  Ready.

Comments:  This document is ready for publication from my 
perspective.  Just two nits, which the authors may want to 
correct:

Section 3.2.8. ("<message> element"):

> The <message> element indicates that the service supports
>  message as a streaming media type as defined in [12].

s/supports message/supports messaging/

Section 3.2.10. ("<automata> element"):

> The <automata> element indicates whether the service 
> represents an automata [...]

s/an automata/an automaton/

Hope this helps, regards,

- Christian

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