Subject: [Gen-art] review of draft-daboo-imap-annotatemore-12.txt

From: Francis Dupont <[email-masked]>
Date: Tue, 15 Jan 2008 16:34:07 +0100

I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART)
reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see
http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html).

Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments
you may receive.

Document: draft-daboo-imap-annotatemore-12.txt
Reviewer: Francis Dupont
Review Date: 2008-01-14
IETF LC End Date: 2008-01-30
IESG Telechat date: unknown

Summary: Ready

Comments: Some editorial (i.e., to be handled by the RFC Editor) comments:
 - Abstract page 1: add (IMAP) after Internet Message Access Protocol
 - 3.3 page 8: A user -> Users
 - 3.3 page 8: If the client -> if a client
 - 4.1 page 9: i.e. -> i.e., (there are four i.e.s in this page and
  some others after)
 - 4.2 page 11: this criteria -> these criteria
 - 4.3 page 12: the extended LIST command return -> ... returns
 - 5 page 22: parenthesised -> parenthesized
 - 6.3.5 pag 27: remove "Please register..."
Note you have some comments from the Last Call and many normative references
are still at the draft state (the second point should not be a problem, the
RFC Editor will just publish all interdependent documents together).

Thanks

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