Subject: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-mpls-multicast-encaps-07.txt

From: "Vijay K. Gurbani" <[email-masked]>
Date: Fri, 25 Apr 2008 15:51:42 -0500

I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART)
reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see
http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html).

Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before
posting a new version of the draft.

Document: draft-ietf-mpls-multicast-encaps-07.txt
Reviewer: Vijay K. Gurbani
Review Date: 25 Apr 2008
IESG Telechat date: 25 Apr 2008

Summary: This draft is ready for publication as a Proposed Standard.

Some nits:

- S3, second paragraph: s/If Ru and RD/If Ru and Rd/

- Same paragraph: you may want to consider terminating each numbered
  item except the last one with a comma.

- S3, the numbered list towards the *end* of the section: You
  may want to consider terminating each numbered item with a period.

Thanks,

- vijay
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