Subject: [Gen-art] preliminary review of draft-resnick-2822upd-06.txt

From: Francis Dupont <[email-masked]>
Date: Fri, 11 Apr 2008 09:43:03 +0200

I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART)
reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see
http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html).

Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments
you may receive.

Document: draft-resnick-2822upd-06.txt
Reviewer: Francis Dupont
Review Date: 2008-04-10
IETF LC End Date: 2008-05-01
IESG Telechat date: unknown

Summary: Ready

Comments:

This is a preliminary review as the document is pretty long
but I already read the half and found near nothing to signal...

A spelling error: acknowledgement -> acknowledgment
(including Acknowledgements, even there are two spellings the IETF uses
only the other one. The RFC Editor will fix this).

We need a ABNF doctor to check the large amount of ABNF.

Regards

[email-masked]

PS; about the X-* header fields IMHO there is nothing to change in
this document.
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