Subject: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-tcpm-rfc4138bis-04.txt

From: "Miguel A. Garcia" <[email-masked]>
Date: Mon, 03 Nov 2008 10:39:00 +0100

I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART)
reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see
http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html).

Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments
you may receive.

Document: draft-ietf-tcpm-rfc4138bis-04.txt
Reviewer: Miguel Garcia <[email-masked]>
Review Date: 2008-11-03
IETF LC End Date: 2008-11-13

Summary: The draft is ready for publication as a proposed standard RFC.

Comments: The document is clear and well written. Just nits:

- Expand acronyms at first occurrence. This includes: RTO, MSS
- You don't need to expand the well known term "TCP". But if you do it, 
it should also be at first occurrence.

/Miguel
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Miguel A. Garcia
+34-91-339-3608
Ericsson Spain
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