Subject: [Gen-art] Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-mediactrl-vxml-03.txt

From: "McCann Peter-A001034" <[email-masked]>
Date: Wed, 21 Jan 2009 15:43:41 -0500

for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see
http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html ). 

Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments
you may receive. 

Document: draft-ietf-mediactrl-vxml-03.txt
Reviewer: Pete McCann
Review Date: 2009-01-22
IETF LC End Date: 2009-01-26
IESG Telechat date: (not known) 

Summary: Ready.  The document is well-written and complete.

Major issues: None

Minor issues: None

Nits/editorial comments: 

   Section 2.5: "encoutering" should be "encountering"

   Section 4.2: "converted to to their JSON value" should be "converted
to their JSON value"

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