Subject: [Gen-art] Genart IETF LC review of draft-ietf-rserpool-mib-10.txt

From: Robert Sparks <[email-masked]>
Date: Thu, 5 Feb 2009 16:49:31 -0600

I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART)
reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see
http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html).

Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments
you may receive.

Document: draft-ietf-rserpool-mib-10.txt
Reviewer: Robert Sparks
Review Date: 5Feb09
IETF LC End Date: 6Feb09
IESG Telechat date: unknown

Summary: Basically ready, but with nits that need to be addressed

Caveat: I am not a MIB expert.

Bert Wijnen points to several improvements at http://www.ietf.org/mail-archive/web/ietf/current/msg55179.html

If possible, please also increase the level of detail in the IANA  
considerations section