Subject: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Review of draft-hollenbeck-rfc4932bis-01

From: Avshalom Houri <[email-masked]>
Date: Wed, 10 Jun 2009 13:40:26 +0300

I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART)
reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see
http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html).

Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments
you may receive.

Document: draft-hollenbeck-rfc4932bis-01
Reviewer: Avshalom Houri
Review Date: 2009-06-10
IETF LC End Date: 2009-06-11
IESG Telechat date: (not known)

Summary: This document is ready for publication as a Full Standard

Major issues: None

Minor issues: None

Nits/editorial comments: 

Line 151:
   an internal host is subordinate relates to a domain within the

-- The sentence needs to be rephrased.

Thanks
--Avshalom