Subject: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-16ng-ip-over-ethernet-over-802-dot-16-10.txt

From: "Miguel A. Garcia" <[email-masked]>
Date: Thu, 27 Aug 2009 09:57:44 +0200

I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART)
reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see
http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html).

Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments
you may receive.

Document: draft-ietf-16ng-ip-over-ethernet-over-802-dot-16-10.txt
Reviewer: Miguel Garcia <[email-masked]>
Review Date: 27 Aug 2009
IETF LC End Date: 1 Sep 2009

Summary: The document is ready for publication as a standards track RFC.

Nits/editorial comments:

The document is clear and well written. If possible, abbreviations should 
be expanded a first occurrence (e.g., QoS, MAC, CID, AR, DHCP, IGMP, etc.).

/Miguel

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Miguel A. Garcia
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