Subject: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-pkix-sha2-dsa-ecdsa-08

From: "McCann Peter-A001034" <[email-masked]>
Date: Mon, 5 Oct 2009 14:57:19 -0400

I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviewer
for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see
http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html ).

Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments
you may receive. 

Document: draft-ietf-pkix-sha2-dsa-ecdsa-08
Reviewer: Pete McCann
Review Date: 2009-10-05
IETF LC End Date: 2009-10-05
IESG Telechat date: unknown 

Summary: Ready

Major issues: None

Minor issues: None

Nits/editorial comments:

Abstract:
   lists(CRLs).This
SHOULD BE:
   lists (CRLs). This

Introduction:
   in RFC 5280 [RFC 5280].This
SHOULD BE:
   in RFC 5280 [RFC 5280]. This

   2.2.2,and
SHOULD BE:
   2.2.2, and

Section 2:
There is extra space in the second line of id-sha512 OID.

Section 4:
   in RFC 5480
SHOULD BE:
   in the RFC 5480