Subject: [Gen-art] Gen Art LC review of draft-ietf-idnabis-protocol-16

From: Avshalom Houri <[email-masked]>
Date: Wed, 14 Oct 2009 12:08:18 +0200

I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART)
reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see
http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html).
 
Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments
you may receive.
 
Document: draft-ietf-idnabis-protocol-16
Reviewer: Avshalom Houri
Review Date: 2009-10-14
IETF LC End Date: 2009-10-13
IESG Telechat date: -

Summary:

This draft is ready for publication as Standard Track RFC.

Major issues: None

Minor issues: None

Nits/editorial comments:

Line 382 -    (Section 5) are very similar in most respects, they not 
identical and
-> ... they are  not identical ...

Thanks
--Avshalom