Subject: [Gen-art] Gen Art LC reeview of: draft-combes-ipdvb-mib-rcs-08.txt

From: Avshalom Houri <[email-masked]>
Date: Wed, 25 Nov 2009 16:08:02 +0200

I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) 
reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see 
http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html). 
Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments 
you may receive. 
Document: draft-combes-ipdvb-mib-rcs-08.txt
Reviewer: Avshalom Houri
Review Date: 2009-11-25
IETF LC End Date: 2009-11-23
IESG Telechat date: -
Summary: The draft is ready for publication as an informational RFC.
Major issues: None
Minor issues: None
Nits/editorial comments: 

Line 148
        of DVB-RCS terminal management [SATLABS]. As a part of this
As a part ---> As part 

Line 412
        The DVB-RCS TDMA corresponds to the return or mesh link of a RCS 
a RCS ---> an RCS

Line 413
        transparent system or the uplink of a RCS regenerative system. 
a RCS ---> an RCS

Thanks
--Avshalom