Subject: [Gen-art] Gen Art LC & TC review of draft-ietf-16ng-ipv4-over-802-dot-16-ipcs-06

From: Avshalom Houri <[email-masked]>
Date: Tue, 1 Dec 2009 17:04:41 +0200

I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART)
reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see
http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html).

Please wait for direction from your document shepherd
or AD before posting a new version of the draft.

Document: draft-ietf-16ng-ipv4-over-802-dot-16-ipcs-06
Reviewer: Avshalom Houri 
Review Date: 2009-12-01
IETF Last Call date: 2009-12-02
IESG Telechat date: 2009-12-03

Summary: The document is ready to be published as a standard track RFC
and the document is a reasonable basis on which to build
the salient part of the Internet 

Major issues: None
Minor issues: None
Nits/editorial comments:

Line 643
   defined a network architecture[WMF].  Furthermore, WiMAX has
-->
   defined a network architecture [WMF].  Furthermore, WiMAX has

Thanks
--Avshalom