Subject: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-altman-tls-channel-bindings-07.txt

From: Suresh Krishnan <[email-masked]>
Date: Mon, 21 Dec 2009 17:58:43 -0500

I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for
draft-altman-tls-channel-bindings-07.txt

For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at
<http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html>.

Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments
you may receive.

Summary: This draft is ready for publication as Proposed Standard but I 
have a few comments.

* Section 2

"Subsequent to the publication of "On Channel Bindings" [RFC5246]"

Shouldn't this reference point to RFC5056 instead?

* Normative references

Why are the normative references for 'tls-server-end-point' separated 
out from the other normative references?

Thanks
Suresh