Subject: [Gen-art] Gen-art review of draft-bryan-http-digest-algorithm-values-update-04

From: Gonzalo Camarillo <[email-masked]>
Date: Mon, 18 Jan 2010 11:17:08 +0200

Hi,

version 04 of this draft addresses all my comments below.

Thanks,

Gonzalo

Gonzalo Camarillo wrote:
> Hi,
> 
> I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART)
> reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see
> http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html).
> 
> Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments
> you may receive.
> 
> 
> Draft: draft-bryan-http-digest-algorithm-values-update-03.txt
> Reviewer: Gonzalo Camarillo <[email-masked]>
> Review Date: 9 December 2009
> 
> Summary:
> 
> This draft is basically ready for publication, but has nits that should
> be fixed before publication.
> 
> 
> Comments:
> 
> Abstracts should not contain references because it should be possible to
> read them as stand-alone documents.
> 
> The note in the second paragraph of the Introduction states that this is
> unrelated to HTTP authentication. Adding an extra sentence explaining
> what this relates to instead would be useful.
> 
> Section 4 does not mention the addition of two new algorithms.
> 
> 
> Thanks,
> 
> Gonzalo
> 
> 
>