Subject: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Review of draft-ietf-6man-ipv6-subnet-model-08

From: "McCann Peter-A001034" <[email-masked]>
Date: Tue, 9 Mar 2010 16:45:34 -0500

I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviewer
for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see
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Document: draft-ietf-6man-ipv6-subnet-model-08
Reviewer: Pete McCann
Review Date: 09 March 2010
IESG Telechat date: 11 March 2010

Summary: Ready

Major issues: None

Minor issues: None

Nits/editorial comments:

Abstract:
   difference; that
SHOULD BE:
   difference: that

Introduction:
   or has on-link
SHOULD BE:
   or can have on-link

   Prefix List, i.e., have
   not yet timed out,
SHOULD BE:
   Prefix List (i.e., have
   not yet timed out)

   Host Behavior and Rules section.
SHOULD BE:
   Host Behavior and Host Rules sections.