Subject: [Gen-art] review of draft-arkko-pana-iana-02

From: Wassim Haddad <[email-masked]>
Date: Tue, 9 Mar 2010 13:02:01 -0500

I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviewer for
this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see
http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html).

Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you
may receive.

Document: draft-arkko-pana-iana-02
Reviewer: Wassim Haddad
Review Date: 2010-03-09
LC End Date: 2010-03-11 IESG Telechat date: 2010-03-11

Summary: Ready

Major issues: None

Minor issues: None

Editorial/nits:

Section 1: Introduction: last line:
-> suggest removing "an"

Section 2: IANA considerations: 1st line:
-> s/updated/update

Regards,

Wassim H.