Subject: [Gen-art] Gen Art LC review of: draft-ietf-nsis-ntlp-statemachine-09

From: Avshalom Houri <[email-masked]>
Date: Wed, 17 Mar 2010 11:37:14 +0200

I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) 
reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see 
http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html). 
Please wait for direction from your document shepherd 
or AD before posting a new version of the draft. 

Document: draft-ietf-nsis-ntlp-statemachine-09
Reviewer: Avshalom Houri
Review Date: 2010-03-17 (late - sorry)
IESG last call date: 2010-03-12

Summary: The document is ready to be published as an informational RFC

Major issues: None

Minor issues: Noen

Nits/editorial comments: 

Line 532
      Error response, send by the Responding node indicating lost
->        Error response, sent by the Responding node indicating lost

Line 795
   **) Depending on the local policy NSLPdata might be send as payload
-->    **) Depending on the local policy NSLPdata might be sent as payload

avshalom