Subject: [Gen-art] Gen Art LC review of draft-ietf-netmod-yang-11

From: Avshalom Houri <[email-masked]>
Date: Sun, 11 Apr 2010 19:10:25 +0300

I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) 
reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see 
http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html). 
Please wait for direction from your document shepherd 
or AD before posting a new version of the draft. 

Document: draft-ietf-netmod-yang-11
Reviewer: Avshalom Houri
Review Date: 2010-04-11 (sorry for the delay but it is 180 pps...).
IESG last call date: 2010-04-09

Summary: The draft is ready to be published as standard track RFC

Major issues: None

Minor issues: None

Nits/editorial comments: 

Lines 4643-4652:
   No restrictions are placed on the XML.  This can be useful in for
....
   example RPC replies.  An example is the <filter> parameter in the

in for example -> for example in

Line 5861:
   contents of the deviation statement give details about the deviation.
give details -> gives details

Line 5887:
   back to the unsuspecting application, or ignore that incoming
or ignore -> or ignores

tnx
avshalom