Subject: [Gen-art] Gen-art review of draft-ietf-nsis-ntlp-sctp-12

From: Wassim Haddad <[email-masked]>
Date: Mon, 31 May 2010 22:13:07 -0700

I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for draft-ietf-nsis-ntlp-sctp-12.
For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at <http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html>.
Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive.

IETF LC End Date: 06 / 01 / 2010
IESG Telechat date: 06 / 03 / 2010

Summary:

The draft is ready for publication as experimental RFC.

Major Issues: None

Minor Issues: None

Nits/editorial comments:

- Page 5, section 2: suggest re-wording of: 
"A messaging association is bidirectional.  A messaging association is bi-directional: signaling messages can be sent over it in either direction, referring to flows of either direction".

- Page 7, section 3.3: which would be particularly useful  
                                                                                     ^^
- Page 10: Note that replay protection....
                             ^^^^

Regards,

Wassim H.