Subject: [Gen-art] Review: draft-josefsson-pbkdf2-test-vectors

From: <[email-masked]>
Date: Mon, 23 Aug 2010 16:19:05 -0400

I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on
Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at
< http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>.

Please wait for direction from your document shepherd
or AD before posting a new version of the draft.

Document:  draft-josefsson-pbkdf2-test-vectors
Reviewer:  Kathleen Moriarty
Review Date:  23 August 2010
IESG Telechat date: 26 August 2010

Summary:  This draft is basically ready for publication, but has nits that should be fixed before publication.

Major issues: 0
Minor issues: 0
Nits/editorial comments: 3
1.      Introduction, last sentence:
        Replace second "this" with "the" or "the stated"

2.      Section 2, reword the start of the first sentence from:
"Below the input strings" to
"The input strings below"

3.      Section 4, replace:
Remove the comma before the word and, it is not necessary.  Consider removing the word effectively.  If it is available, the word effectively is not necessary.

Thank you,
Kathleen