Subject: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-v6ops-cpe-simple-security-14

From: "Vijay K. Gurbani" <[email-masked]>
Date: Tue, 05 Oct 2010 08:46:53 -0500

I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on
Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at
<http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>.

Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments
you may receive.

Document: draft-ietf-v6ops-cpe-simple-security-14
Reviewer: Vijay K. Gurbani
Review Date: Oct-05-2010
IETF LC End Date: unknown
IESG Telechat date: Oct-07-2010

Summary: This draft is ready as an Informational.
Major issues: 0
Minor issues: 0
Nits/editorial comments: 1

Nits:

1) S2, top of page 5: "While consensus within the Internet
engineering community has emerged that such protocols are necessary to
implement in residential IPv6 residential gateways, ..." In case the
reader is further interested, it would be good to have some references
to documents outlining such consensus.

Thanks,

- vijay
-- 
Vijay K. Gurbani, Bell Laboratories, Alcatel-Lucent
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