Subject: [Gen-art] Gen Art LC of draft-ietf-mpls-ldp-upstream-08

From: Avshalom Houri <[email-masked]>
Date: Wed, 13 Oct 2010 18:16:31 +0200

I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on
Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at
< http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>.

Please wait for direction from your document shepherd
or AD before posting a new version of the draft.

Document: draft-ietf-mpls-ldp-upstream-08
Reviewer: Avshalom Houri
Review Date: 2010-10-13
IESG Telechat date: -

Summary: The document is ready for a Standard Track RFC.

Major issues: None
Minor issues: None
Nits/editorial comments:

One or more occurrences in the document
a LDP -> an LDP
a LSR -> an LSR
a MPLS -> an MPLS

Line 540
   [MLDP] describe how to setup P2MP LSPs using LDP. On a LAN the
->    [MLDP] describes how to setup P2MP LSPs using LDP. On a LAN the

Line 572
   Ru on receiving this message sends back a Label Mapping message to Rd
->    On receiving this message, Ru sends back a Label Mapping message to 
Rd

tnx
-Avshalom