Subject: [Gen-art] Gen Art TC review of draft-ietf-mpls-ldp-upstream-09

From: Avshalom Houri <[email-masked]>
Date: Mon, 29 Nov 2010 19:57:01 +0200

Document: draft-ietf-mpls-ldp-upstream-09
Reviewer: Avshalom Houri
Review Date: 2010-11-29
IESG Telechat date: 2010-11-30

Summary: The document is ready for a Standard Track RFC.

Major issues: None
Minor issues: None

Nits/editorial comments:

One or more occurrences in the document
a LDP -> an LDP
a LSR -> an LSR
a MPLS -> an MPLS

Line 540
   [MLDP] describe how to setup P2MP LSPs using LDP. On a LAN the
->    [MLDP] describes how to setup P2MP LSPs using LDP. On a LAN the

Line 572
   Ru on receiving this message sends back a Label Mapping message to Rd
->    On receiving this message, Ru sends back a Label Mapping message to 
Rd

tnx
Avshalom