Subject: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call Review of draft-ietf-isis-ieee-aq-03

From: Pete McCann <[email-masked]>
Date: Sat, 22 Jan 2011 10:43:34 -0600

I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on
Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at
<http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>.

Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments
you may receive.

Document: draft-ietf-isis-ieee-aq-03
Reviewer: Pete McCann
Review Date: 2011-01-22
IETF LC End Date: 2011-01-18
IESG Telechat date: unknown

Summary: Ready

Major issues: none

Minor issues:

Section 4.4:
In Figure 1, the bits are laid out in a bytewise-bigendian but
bitwise-littlendian manner.  Is this what was intended?

Nits/editorial comments:

Section 1:
   Missing Introduction text

Section 2:
   Q-in-Q encapsulation)
SHOULD BE:
   Q-in-Q encapsulation

   BridgeID       64 bit quantity = Bridge Priority:16 o SYSID:48
Does that o mean concatenation?  This notation isn't clear.

Section 5:
   in which cast
SHOULD BE:
   in which case