Subject: [Gen-art] Gen Art LC + TC review of draft-ietf-mmusic-image-attributes-10

From: Avshalom Houri <[email-masked]>
Date: Wed, 19 Jan 2011 16:32:31 +0200

I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on 
Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at <
http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>.

Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you 
may receive.

Document: draft-ietf-mmusic-image-attributes-10
Reviewer: Avshalom Houri
Review Date: 2011-01-19
IETF LC End Date: 2011-01-20
IESG Telechat date: (if known) - 2011-01-20

Summary: The document is ready as a standard track RFC.

Major issues: None

Minor issues: 

Lines 1147-1148 - Not clear that the paragraph is trying to say.

Nits/editorial comments:

Line 163 notice -> to notice/noticing
Line 833 anser -> answer
Line 875 cause -> causes
Line 940 notice -> noticing
Line 1115 wish -> wishes
Line 1119 wish -> wishes
Line 1144 , in order to satisfy Bob's request, -> (in order to satisfy 
Bob's request)
Line 1153 the IANA -> IANA

Tnx
Avshalom