Subject: Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-netconf-4741bis-07.txt

From: Brian E Carpenter <[email-masked]>
Date: Tue, 22 Feb 2011 09:17:31 +1300

Thanks! This looks much clearer in the way it uses normative
language. IMHO it's ready for the IESG.

Regards
   Brian

On 2011-02-21 21:17, Bert (IETF) Wijnen wrote:
> Revision 09 addresses your comments.
> There was indeed quite some work to do on the 2119 language
> which we did. Hope the new rev is OK with you.
> 
> Here is the diff between the rev you reviewed and the latest one:
>   
> http://tools.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url1=draft-ietf-netconf-4741bis-07&url2=draft-ietf-netconf-4741bis-09
> 
> 
> Bert
> document shepherd
> 
> On 1/31/11 1:59 AM, Brian E Carpenter wrote:
>> Please see attached review.
>