Subject: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Telechat Review of draft-giralt-schac-ns-04

From: Pete McCann <[email-masked]>
Date: Tue, 15 Mar 2011 21:04:29 -0500

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Document: draft-giralt-schac-ns-04
Reviewer: Pete McCann
Review Date: 2011-03-15
IETF LC End Date:
IESG Telechat date: 2011-03-17

Summary: Still has issues

Major issues:

The issues from Sean Turner's review:
http://www.softarmor.com/rai/temp-gen-art/draft-giralt-schac-ns-02-turner.txt
have yet to be taken into account.  In particular, there is no text on
internationalization
of the strings in the namespace and no definition of the registration process
or rules that registrants should follow.

Minor issues: none

Nits/editorial comments:

Section 2:
   comunity
SHOULD BE:
   community