Subject: [Gen-art] Telechat review of draft-ietf-msec-gdoi-update-10 (for the record)

From: Elwyn Davies <[email-masked]>
Date: Fri, 12 Aug 2011 00:03:44 +0100

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Document: draft-ietf-msec-gdoi-update-10
Reviewer: Elwyn Davies
Review Date: 11 August 2011
IESG Telechat date: 11 August 2011

Summary: Ready (for the record).  It appears that essentially all my 
points from the Last Call review of -09 have been cleared up - thanks to 
the authors.  [Due to other things going on I missed the lastish minute 
release of -10 and have only just seen it.  In the meantime the draft 
has been approved.]

Major issues:

Minor issues:

Nits/editorial comments:
s7, next to last para: s/is of the utmost importance/are of the utmost 
importance/

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