Subject: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-v6ops-464xlat-08

From: "Miguel A. Garcia" <[email-masked]>
Date: Sun, 6 Jan 2013 09:39:53 +0100

I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART)
reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at
<http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>

Please resolve these comments along with any other comments you may receive.

Document: draft-ietf-v6ops-464xlat-08
Reviewer: Miguel Garcia <[email-masked]>
Review Date: 2013-01-05
IETF LC End Date: 2013-01-10
IESG Telechat date: 2013-01-10

Summary: The document is ready for publication as a BCP.

Major issues: none

Minor issues: none

Nits/editorial comments:

- Expand acronyms at first occurrence. This includes: GGSN (used in 
Figure 2), PDP (used in Figure 2, but not expanded until Section 7.2 
later), ISP, 3GPP, GSM, and UMTS.

/Miguel
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Miguel A. Garcia
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Ericsson Spain