Subject: [Gen-art] Gen-ART LC/Telechat review of draft-ietf-dhc-dhcpv6-client-link-layer-addr-opt-04

From: Ben Campbell <[email-masked]>
Date: Mon, 25 Feb 2013 17:28:06 -0600

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Document:  draft-ietf-dhc-dhcpv6-client-link-layer-addr-opt-04
Reviewer: Ben Campbell
Review Date: 2013-02-25
IETF LC End Date: 2013-02-28
IESG Telechat date: 2013-02-28

Summary: Ready for publication as a proposed standard

Major issues:

None

Minor issues:

None

Nits/editorial comments:

-- Header:

I ca't help but enjoy the fact that the file name is longer than the draft title :-)  (No change needed)

-- section 2, last paragraph:

s/"For e.g."/"For example,"