Subject: Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART LC review of draft-merkle-tls-brainpool-02

From: Johannes Merkle <[email-masked]>
Date: Tue, 02 Jul 2013 14:23:50 +0200

a new version addressing your review is on its way.

Johannes

Roni Even schrieb am 30.06.2013 08:44:
> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at
> <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>.
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> Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive.
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> Document: draft-merkle-tls-brainpool-02
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> Reviewer: Roni Even
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> Review Date:2013–6–30
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> IETF LC End Date: 2013-7–23
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> IESG Telechat date:
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> Summary: This draft is almost ready for publication as Standard track RFC.
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> In section 1 you reference TLS 1.0 and 1.1 usage based on RFC 4492. What about TLS 1.2 usage specified in RFC5246 A.7
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> Nits/editorial comments:
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>  1. In section 3 the  registry name is EC Named Curve
>  2. In section 3 change “suitability” to “suitable”
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