Subject: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Telechat Call review of draft-ietf-spfbis-4408bis-20

From: Meral Shirazipour <[email-masked]>
Date: Thu, 19 Sep 2013 23:41:18 +0000

I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at < http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq> .

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Document: draft-ietf-spfbis-4408bis-20
Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour
Review Date: 2013-09-19
IETF LC End Date: 2013-09-02
IESG Telechat date: 2013-09-26

Summary: This draft is ready to be published as Proposed Standard but I have minor comments.

Nits/editorial comments:
-[Page 12], section 3, one line from the example was removed, the text needs to be adjusted (text is referring to more than one line):
"
The example in this section might be published via these lines in a domain zone file:
example.com.          TXT "v=spf1 +mx a:colo.example.com/28 -all"
"

-[Page 66], Section E.3., Title, "Receving ADMDs" --typo--> "Receiving ADMDs"

Best Regards,
Meral
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Meral Shirazipour
Ericsson
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