Subject: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-ospf-manet-single-hop-or-03

From: Christer Holmberg <[email-masked]>
Date: Thu, 28 Nov 2013 19:05:40 +0000

I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>
 
Document:                         draft-ietf-ospf-manet-single-hop-or-03
 
Reviewer:                          Christer Holmberg
 
Review Date:                      28 November 2013
 
IETF LC End Date:              17 December 2013
 
IETF Telechat Date:            N/A
 
Summary:  The document is well written, but with one minor issue that the authors may want to consider addressing.
 
Major Issues: None
 
Minor Issues:

As an outsider, it is a little difficult for me to get a picture of exactly how the document updates RFC 5820. Would it be possible to add a few words to the last paragraph in the introduction. Something like:

"This document updates [RFC5820] by describing the use of the MANET interface in single-hop broadcast networks, by blah blah blah, blah blah blah, and blah blah blah."
 
Editorial nits: None