Subject: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review for draft-ietf-mpls-ldp-applicability-label-adv-02

From: "Romascanu, Dan (Dan)" <[email-masked]>
Date: Mon, 24 Feb 2014 12:46:26 +0000

I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at

<http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>.

Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive.

Document: draft-ietf-mpls-ldp-applicability-label-adv-02

Reviewer: Dan Romascanu

Review Date: 2/24/14

IETF LC End Date: 2/24/14

IESG Telechat date:

Summary: ready with minor issues

Major issues:

Minor issues:

In the table in 2.2 - the RFC column points to RFC 5036 for the first two entries. Actually RFC 5036 defines only the range for LDP FEC types, but says nothing about the values. The right information seems to be 'xxxx (this RFC)' or '5036 and xxxx (this RFC)'

Nits/editorial comments:

Some acronyms are not expanded at first occurrence - FEC, LSR

Regards,

Dan