Subject: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-oauth-saml2-bearer-21

From: Meral Shirazipour <[email-masked]>
Date: Mon, 29 Sep 2014 07:40:14 +0000

I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq.

Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive.

Document: draft-ietf-oauth-saml2-bearer-21
Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour
Review Date: 2014-09-29
IETF LC End Date:  2014-09-29
IESG Telechat date: NA

Summary:
This draft is ready to be published as Standards Track RFC .

Nits/editorial comments:
Nits:
-Abstract, please consider smelling out Security Assertion Markup Language
-[Page 4] Section 2.1 ",use an access ..", it would be clearer to name the entity (AS?) who would have to "use and access token...".
-[Page 5] Section 2.2 ", use the following parameter", same comment as above.

Best Regards,
Meral
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Meral Shirazipour
Ericsson
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