Subject: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-opsawg-capwap-hybridmac-06

From: Meral Shirazipour <[email-masked]>
Date: Sat, 8 Nov 2014 01:17:02 +0000

I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq.

Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive.

Document: draft-ietf-opsawg-capwap-hybridmac-06
Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour
Review Date: 2014-11-07
IETF LC End Date:  2014-11-10
IESG Telechat date: NA

Summary:
This draft is ready to be published as Standards Track RFC but I have some editorial comments .

Nits/editorial comments:
-[Page 1], Abstract, suggestion: please spell out CAPWAP: "Control And Provisioning of Wireless Access Points (CAPWAP)"
-[Page 1], Abstract, suggestion: "However, in the split MAC mode," ----> use "Split" instead of "split" (to review the rest of draft)
-[Page 1], Abstract, remove double occurrence of "clearly": in "...not been clearly clearly defined"
Also correct:
"functions are not been clearly clearly defined"----->"functions have not been clearly defined" or "functions are not clearly defined"

Best Regards,
Meral
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Meral Shirazipour
Ericsson
Research
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