Subject: [Gen-art] review of draft-ietf-tsvwg-sctp-dtls-encaps-07.txt

From: Francis Dupont <[email-masked]>
Date: Wed, 31 Dec 2014 15:08:53 +0100

I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on
Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at

<http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>.

Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments
you may receive.

Document: draft-ietf-tsvwg-sctp-dtls-encaps-07.txt
Reviewer: Francis Dupont
Review Date: 20141224
IETF LC End Date: 20141224
IESG Telechat date: unknown

Summary: Ready

Major issues: None

Minor issues: None

Nits/editorial comments:
 5 page 4: in "its lower layer should provide this"
  the term "should" is ambiguous, i.e., either it is a keyword
  and SHOULD is better, or it is not and a different word should be used.
  Note I don't know the authors' intention so the best solution.

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