Subject: Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-drinks-spp-protocol-over-soap-07

From: Jari Arkko <[email-masked]>
Date: Tue, 3 Feb 2015 18:26:29 +0200

Thanks for your review, Roni.

Authors, have you observed these comments, and you have any response?

Jari

On 20 Jan 2015, at 08:51, Roni Even <[email-masked]> wrote:

> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>.
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> Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive.
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> Document:  draft-ietf-drinks-spp-protocol-over-soap-07
> Reviewer: Roni Even
> Review Date:2015–1-17
> IETF LC End Date: 2015–1-22
> IESG Telechat date:
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> Summary: This draft is almost ready for publication as a standard track RFC.
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> There are two schemas used, the sppf:base and sppf:soap each have a version number. When talking about supported version and about response codes on supported version, is it referring to the base or soap version? There is some text in the minorVer section but it is not clear enough.
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> The “complexType name="ResultCodeType” is defined in multiple subsections (7.2.1.2 , 7.2.2.2 , …) but not in all places, should be specified only once or in all. Also the definitions in section 7 are not consistent with the ones in section 9 which is the formal definition.
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